Day 4 Rise and Write
has me thinking about tress. If you want to learn more, here is where you
can find the details on the daily writing prompts at Out of the Writers Closet: Rise and Write.
Write
about a tree (or another plant) that you see from your window. What kind of
tree it is? How tall it is? Does it bear fruit or berries? Is it a home to
birds or small animals? If not, could it be a home to mythical creatures? What
would you think of it as a child?
The Climbing Tree
“I
don't know much about trees, but we need one that will be big enough to
climb." Sam told her husband that cold February day when they were looking
out the back door over the snow covered blank canvass that would become
their yard in less than a month. She was holding a sleeping baby while her two
year old was running up and down the stairs and room to room, totally free from
clutter of unimportant things like furniture and stuff on tables he could knock
off. Even after they moved in, it was years before they had proper furniture
for most of the rooms, extra money and space needed for two active children.
They purchased the house on a contract for deed, as is, 98% finished, from her sister’s law firm who had the property in escrow after the builder went bankrupt. There was a chance that the family the house was originally built for, could decide to take possession again, but they only had another six months to do so. The risk was low, as in the year and 1/2 the house sat empty, they surely had moved on to find or build a different home. Still, the couple was nervous, so waited the full six months before doing any real back yard work, bringing the calendar to September.
The
tree imagined, if not quite visualized, turned out to be an oak tree.
Many new homeowners, excited by the prospect of doing their own landscaping,
picking our shrubs, and flowers, and trees, are unprepared for the added
cost. This was the case for Sam and her husband. The oak was a tall,
but skinny little thing, with branches no bigger than her children's fingers.
A budget tree, still, it was well over $100, or in the reference Sam used for cost comparison
at the time, a month of diapers. They planted the tree with bone meal, and put
a plastic tube, slit on the one side around the tree to keep any animals form
getting at it. Year by year that tree grew taller, and wider, and stronger.
The tubing was removed. Leaves, sparse at first, began to fill in each spring, and slowly,
provided shade for an early morning cup of coffee.
The
baby and two year old grew older, started school, and eventually outgrew the
opportunity to climb the tree without breaking the limbs. The boy, now a
strapping teen, did use a branch as a pull up bar after going for a run. A
little sister came along, and the former baby that slept in Sam's arm, now
would be the good big sister and sometimes sit on a blanket under the tree with
the new baby, laughing as she learned to roll over. The tree kept
growing, stronger and thicker.
One
day when the third child was about seven or eight and had been playing
outside, Sam went to call her in for dinner. She had thought she was just in
the back yard with a couple neighbor kids, but didn't see her so called out her
name. She heard a little giggle and then someone saying "shhh". Sam
called her name again, which was responded to with more giggles, then laughter.
"Look up, mom” said a voice. Sam moved closer to the tree, and
then leaned over and turned her head up. There was her daughter and
friend each sitting precariously on a couple of the lowest branches. The
canopy of lush green leaves had concealed them from first view. Sam had her
climbing tree.
Mmm, this brings back memories of the "climbing tree" in our first back yard as kids. It was already old when we moved in and its huge branches spread nearly across the half the width of our yard. Many climbing adventures and the discovery of "sap" (the stuff that could some day turn into amber, under the right conditions) ... plans for a tree house. Yes, climbing trees are a good thing. Wonderful post. :)
ReplyDeleteI grew up with many great climbing tees. No full on tree houses, but we did have a few boards hammered in between branches, creating little landings. Great fun I wanted my kids to have.
DeleteI love the black canvas metaphor - could apply not for the new yard only, but for the newly build family and their new life in the new house. It's amazing what meaning a tree can get for our life! Loved your story. And how you look at it from a distance (you notice it too, right? When we write in the 1st person, it is more intimate, and more openly subjective, while when in the 3rd person, it creates a certain distance and a feeling of an "objective" point of view).
ReplyDeleteI think it is so much easier for me to tell stories from a third person perspective, because I feel like if I am not 100% accurate or veer off "script" in first person, I'll feel inauthentic. Third person helps me have the memory, but the liberty of of a little creative license.
DeleteOh I felt for Sam. We have had mixed results with tree climbing. A branch here and there, a tree house built under a tree and a partial treehouse that broke its foundations and wasn't completed.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad the third child had the dream! Jazzy Jack